Coll S asked:

El verano pasado, yo fui a Hershey, Pennslyvania con my familia y mi major amiga sarah y su familia. Nosotros conducimos alli en tre horas. Fui para el concierto de los Jonas Brothers. El concierto fue el 25 de Julio. Nosotros conducimos por tres horas. Yo fiu a nueve conciertos de los Jonas Brothers en toda mi vida. Yo mire el amor de my vida, Nick Jonas. Yo comi mucho choclate y dulce. Nosotros dormimos en un hotel por tres dias. Mi familia, sarah’s familia y yo fuimos a Hershey Park. Yo monte el roller coaster lamado. Yo tuve divertida.

if i would like to say this:
last summer, i went to hershey, pennsylvania with my family and my best friend Sarah and her family. we drove and got there in 3 hours. I went for a jonas brothers concert. The concert was on July 25th. I’ve been to 9 jonas brothers concerts in my life. i saw the love of my life, nick jonas. i ate a lot of chocolate and candy. we slept in a hotel for 3 days. sarahs family, my fmaily, and me went to hershey park. i rode the rollercoaster called Farenheit. it was a lot of fun.